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<blockquote data-quote="Jaysen" data-source="post: 7349" data-attributes="member: 1"><p>I think it's a good answer. Your writing is clear and I like your analysis. You show a good understanding of the issues.</p><p></p><p>I'm assuming you've written up to the word count, which gives you limited room to develop your points. If you can, I'd work a bit more on your second paragraph. You lead with a great point but then it seems you make a few assumptions. Why must firms increase spending on cybersecurity? Will all firms do that? Will it really affect their competitive advantage? What kind of firms will be affected? Not saying you're wrong, but I think you could show you've thought about the issue more deeply by being more specific.</p><p></p><p>Finally, I'm a little unclear on the last sentence of your last paragraph.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Jaysen, post: 7349, member: 1"] I think it's a good answer. Your writing is clear and I like your analysis. You show a good understanding of the issues. I'm assuming you've written up to the word count, which gives you limited room to develop your points. If you can, I'd work a bit more on your second paragraph. You lead with a great point but then it seems you make a few assumptions. Why must firms increase spending on cybersecurity? Will all firms do that? Will it really affect their competitive advantage? What kind of firms will be affected? Not saying you're wrong, but I think you could show you've thought about the issue more deeply by being more specific. Finally, I'm a little unclear on the last sentence of your last paragraph. [/QUOTE]
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