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Message: <blockquote data-quote="TCLA Community Assistant" data-source="post: 181448" data-attributes="member: 2672">Although I am happy to review sections of applications on occasion and when time allows, I can’t really do this on a continuous basis, so happy to provide feedback again on this occasion but this will be the last time I can do it.I think you are spending too much of your word count describing your experiences. This example also is focused on what your lecturer/other people did rather than your input into the situation. Given this feedback, from what you have written, I have condensed it down to the following:I am primarily interested in Gibson Dunn due to it small team structure that creates a safe space where 'everyone at any level gets to have a seat at the table'. During my university foundation year, I worked on a small group project where I actively participated and contributed my ideas. In addition, I appreciated that no one was afraid to ask questions, which increased the group’s approachability and collaboration. This environment, combined with the close mentorship and personalised feedback I received from my lecturer, contributed significantly to my success, leading to my 89% grade. I intend to maintain this working style in a legal environment as it will continue to develop essential teamwork skills which will help me excel in future endeavours.This part of your answer will need to be balanced out with more specific “why Gibson Dunn” content though, as the small teams could be said for a lot of other firms.</blockquote>

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