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Message: <blockquote data-quote="PMF_II" data-source="post: 6730" data-attributes="member: 35">Here’s my two cents. You have a couple of sentences that read “I look forward to ... as a trainee at Herbert Smith Freehills”. They only repeat the information you have already provided. Perhaps consider replacing them with more detailed explanations of why HSF’s reputation and diversity initiatives would benefit your legal career?I agree with [USER=543]@AJ[/USER] that the structure of your answer is not clear. I understand that you are trying to group your work experience by skills and explain how those skill sets align with HSF’s strengths. To achieve this, I think you need to create stronger connections and smoother transitions between your sentences. At the moment, it’s not easy to recognise the relation between different points in each paragraph when you read it for the first time.</blockquote>

Verification: Our company is called, "The Corporate ___ Academy". What is the missing word here?

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