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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Ram Sabaratnam" data-source="post: 186535" data-attributes="member: 36738">Hey [USER=35327]@a1024[/USER] <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />For structuring your statement, I think you can take the more traditional approach: focus on (1) why commercial law, (2) why Freshfields, and (3) why you. When I wrote my personal statement, I also aimed for an equal split across these sections, ensuring each part was distinct and well-developed.I think one common pitfall to avoid is making the “Why Freshfields” section too generic. Try to really think about those aspects that set Freshfields apart from competitors, like Clifford Chance. I found it helpful to centre my answer on what drew me specifically to Freshfields and why their experience in more advisory matters was appealing to me. Additionally, if you mention a widely noted USP (e.g. their 8-seat rotation, something that many, many applicants end up discussing), try to make the point more personalised to you. For instance, explain why the exposure to diverse practice areas genuinely excites you and how it complements your own professional goals.When it comes to the “Why You” sections of the statement, I would really try to identify things that are distinctive about you as an applicant. I've met many applicants who've successfully discussed their experiences with things like mooting, competitions, or prior vacation schemes. In my case, I chose to discuss my passion for improvised comedy and also development projects, not just legal work. I think that sort of approach allowed me to vividly illustrate my collaborative skills and adaptability in ways that would have been more difficult if I had just stuck to more traditional legal and academic experiences.Good luck with the application!</blockquote>

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