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Message: <blockquote data-quote="trainee4u" data-source="post: 202961" data-attributes="member: 30779">This is a good answer apart from the second clause in this sentence "The firm offers monthly coaching sessions in writing and public speaking, with Neel Sachdev benefiting from the latter. "I'm not certain what you are trying to express there but I assume Neel Sachdev, who in the previous paragraph you've said is a high profile lateral hire, stated that he found it useful. It would therefore make sense to say something like "public speaking. Lateral hires such as Neel Sachdev have expressed how beneficial they find these sessions."At present it reads a bit oddly as it's not quite clear why you're mentioning one specific person when presumably many will have benefited</blockquote>

Verification: Our company is called, "The Corporate ___ Academy". What is the missing word here?

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