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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Amma Usman" data-source="post: 189202" data-attributes="member: 36740">Hi [USER=38117]@Ricimer25[/USER] ,Thank you for sharing your draft—it’s clear you’ve put a lot of thought into it, and I think you’re on the right track. I have some suggestions to make it even stronger and align it more closely with CC’s values. Grammar and Writing Style  Firstly, I noticed the frequent use of colons and dashes. While they can add clarity, overusing them can disrupt the flow of your writing. To make your points more compelling, try varying sentence structures and using transitional phrases.  Instead of:  My regular tasks included analysing data provided by clients, researching the market and industry the client operated in, and using the above to craft informed recommendations for the client.You could say:  In this role, I regularly analysed client data and conducted market research, which enabled me to deliver informed and actionable recommendations tailored to their industry and needs.This approach is smoother and avoids overloading the reader with too many clauses.  Structure and Content  The structure of your answer is good, but I think it could be even more engaging if you intertwine your responsibilities, achievements, and the skills gained more naturally. This would align closely with the guidance from grad recruitment to “weave in” how your experience relates to Clifford Chance.  For instance, instead of describing your tasks first and adding achievements later, try framing each responsibility as a skill you developed that makes you a strong candidate. For example:  In my role as an entry-level consultant, I honed my analytical and problem-solving skills by identifying obstacles hindering a private clinic’s business objectives. I discovered that a lack of administrative staff was preventing doctors from managing patient appointments effectively, leading to missed appointments. By recommending a targeted solution—allocating dedicated administrative staff to manage appointments—I demonstrated both a client-focused approach and the ability to think commercially. This recommendation addressed the clinic’s immediate challenges and also aligns with Clifford Chance’s commitment to delivering impactful, client-led solutions.This approach integrates tasks, skills, and achievements into a single narrative, making the connection to Clifford Chance’s values more seamless.  Showcasing Skills and Relevance  Your example about increasing the clinic’s revenue by $150,000 is excellent—it shows tangible results and demonstrates a commercial mindset. However, you could expand on how the skills you used (e.g., identifying revenue opportunities, devising actionable strategies) are directly relevant to the work of a Clifford Chance trainee. For example:  The ability to identify commercial opportunities, such as increasing the clinic’s revenue by $150,000 through a standardised pricing structure, mirrors the analytical and strategic thinking required in Clifford Chance’s corporate transactions team. This experience reinforced my ability to navigate complex business challenges, ensuring that client outcomes are both innovative and value-driven. These are qualities I would bring to the firm as a trainee.Connecting to Clifford ChanceAt the end of your answer, instead of a general statement like “These skills are particularly valuable to Clifford Chance because the firm prides itself on a client-led approach,” consider being more specific. Highlight how Clifford Chance’s values resonate with your experience. For example:  This experience reflects the skills I would bring to Clifford Chance, a firm known for its focus on delivering tailored solutions to its clients. By combining analytical rigour with a commercial mindset, I am confident in my ability to meet the high standards expected of a trainee and contribute meaningfully to the firm’s innovative and client-centric approach.Final Thoughts  Overall, you’ve got a great foundation. The answer is really good and the achievements are excellent. By refining the structure, weaving in skills more subtly, and explicitly linking your achievements to Clifford Chance’s values, you can make your answer much more memorable.  I hope this feedback helps! Let me know if you have any more questions <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink    ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></blockquote>

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