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<blockquote data-quote="Jaysen" data-source="post: 10049" data-attributes="member: 1">1. I really like your first answer. You were to the point and covered your activities well.To improve:<ul>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">Drill down on why quality was important to you a little further and not just to the company.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">Make sure your sentences are clear, there's a few that could be better phrased.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">&quot;Spreadsheet&quot; is one word.</li>
</ul>2. A strong answer. You're very good at being specific about your response to the situation, well done.To improve:<ul>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">Cut your first sentence, you can dive straight into your answer.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">I like how you've tackled the &quot;energising&quot; point first, but it's a bit waffly. See if you can make this more concise.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">You say you'll update staff members on your progress; can you be more specific?</li>
</ul>To answer your point about the first question, I find personal journeys often make for the best answers.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Jaysen, post: 10049, member: 1"] 1. I really like your first answer. You were to the point and covered your activities well. To improve: [LIST] [*]Drill down on why quality was important [I]to you [/I]a little further and not just to the company. [*]Make sure your sentences are clear, there's a few that could be better phrased. [*]"Spreadsheet" is one word. [/LIST] 2. A strong answer. You're very good at being specific about your response to the situation, well done. To improve: [LIST] [*]Cut your first sentence, you can dive straight into your answer. [*]I like how you've tackled the "energising" point first, but it's a bit waffly. See if you can make this more concise. [*]You say you'll update staff members on your progress; can you be more specific? [/LIST] To answer your point about the first question, I find personal journeys often make for the best answers. [/QUOTE]

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