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<blockquote data-quote="rayofsunshine" data-source="post: 43023" data-attributes="member: 8867"><p>Hi all,</p><p></p><p>I'm feeling really low, really rubbish and lost the slightest confidence I had.</p><p></p><p>Sat mocks for criminal and EU a few weeks ago. Results were in today. Shocking. My heart sank. I had a set structure, which obviously changed a bit here and there based on facts.</p><p></p><p>Just as a side note, my background is engineering, A+ grade student.</p><p></p><p>Feedback as follows:</p><p></p><p>CRIMINAL</p><p>This is a confusing submission. Poor in places and not currently demonstrating your effective application of the law/learning to the facts.</p><p>Review your writing style to facilitate a closer link between AR/MR and the facts. Remember to follow the flow of the question.</p><p></p><p>EU</p><p>Many problems with expression and presentation.</p><p>The structure (Direct Effect, Indirect Effect, State Liability) is fine but you do not articulate well all the relevant legal concepts and tests.</p><p>Your application of the law to the facts is often hesitant and unconvincing.</p><p>Clearly you have some knowledge but you need to develop a more assured writing style. </p><p></p><p></p><p>I don't even know what advice I'm asking for, so any help would be great. Just feel really rubbish!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="rayofsunshine, post: 43023, member: 8867"] Hi all, I'm feeling really low, really rubbish and lost the slightest confidence I had. Sat mocks for criminal and EU a few weeks ago. Results were in today. Shocking. My heart sank. I had a set structure, which obviously changed a bit here and there based on facts. Just as a side note, my background is engineering, A+ grade student. Feedback as follows: CRIMINAL This is a confusing submission. Poor in places and not currently demonstrating your effective application of the law/learning to the facts. Review your writing style to facilitate a closer link between AR/MR and the facts. Remember to follow the flow of the question. EU Many problems with expression and presentation. The structure (Direct Effect, Indirect Effect, State Liability) is fine but you do not articulate well all the relevant legal concepts and tests. Your application of the law to the facts is often hesitant and unconvincing. Clearly you have some knowledge but you need to develop a more assured writing style. I don't even know what advice I'm asking for, so any help would be great. Just feel really rubbish! [/QUOTE]
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