For the question. 'How would you describe the role of a commercial lawyer and why have you chosen a career in commercial law?'. I am going to provide two reasons so would it be okay to do one introductory sentence which 'describes the role of a commercial lawyer' and then have the rest of the paragraph focus on 'why have you chosen a career in commercial law.'
Also, would these descriptions suffice: 'The role of a commercial lawyer involves approaching legal problems with an awareness of the commercial world.' + 'The role of commercial lawyers involves working with change-makers in the commercial world.'
Also, would these descriptions suffice: 'The role of a commercial lawyer involves approaching legal problems with an awareness of the commercial world.' + 'The role of commercial lawyers involves working with change-makers in the commercial world.'