Hi Lawlawland,Hey guys! It has been a while!
I hope you are all doing well...
I want your thoughts on the following.
Simmons has asked me to write a small introduction paragraph, which will be shared with fellow schemers and the seniors at the firm. I would like some advice on whether to write it in the first person and on what tone to use. TIA <3
So glad to see you have succeeded in securing a VS! And with Simmons no less! I recall your being particularly excited about that firm. Really well done and happy for you.
Copypasted are sample intros from another firm with a similar system. I hope they are useful.
Example 1
Joe Smith
University: Warwick
Subject: Law
Languages (Fluent):
Interests/Activities: I have just completed the penultimate year of my degree. In my spare time, I
work as a Venues Assistant at the Student Union and have previously volunteered at my local
Citizens’ Advice Bureau in the role of Advisor. I also enjoy playing football for my university team. In
the last year, I have attended open days at Slaughter and May, Jones Day and DLA Piper and more
recently, have completed work experience at Hollis Whiteman Chambers and Barclays Bank.
Example 2
Amy Jones
University: St Andrews
Subject: English
Languages (Fluent):
Interests/Activities: I am currently undertaking my GDL at BPP, having graduated last year. During
my gap year, I worked as an English language assistant in Beijing and also taught at an orphanage in
Nepal for three months. I have gained legal experience at Freeth Cartwright and Pinsent Masons. At
BPP, I am the Director for Street Law which involves organising presentations for secondary schools
and at St. Andrews, I was an active member of the Dance Society.