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<blockquote data-quote="Jaysen" data-source="post: 5923" data-attributes="member: 1"><p>I think your approach is great. Well justified.</p><p></p><p>A couple of suggestions:</p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><strong>Paragraph 2: </strong>Consider expanding on your reasons for why working as a team was appealing. You've set up the point very well - talking about how you worked with a diverse set of clients - but could you say anything else about why this attracted you to commercial law beyond being able to utilise your skills?</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><strong>Paragraph 3: </strong>In your second sentence, you say "I have found it interesting to understand [XYZ]". Consider expanding on why you found it interesting in your third sentence, rather than explaining what lawyers must understand.</li> </ul></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Jaysen, post: 5923, member: 1"] I think your approach is great. Well justified. A couple of suggestions: [LIST] [*][B]Paragraph 2: [/B]Consider expanding on your reasons for why working as a team was appealing. You've set up the point very well - talking about how you worked with a diverse set of clients - but could you say anything else about why this attracted you to commercial law beyond being able to utilise your skills? [*][B]Paragraph 3: [/B]In your second sentence, you say "I have found it interesting to understand [XYZ]". Consider expanding on why you found it interesting in your third sentence, rather than explaining what lawyers must understand. [/LIST] [/QUOTE]
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